As for their specific Star Trek concept pitch, to be fair and judge it as a first draft, writer's room, hot take level... It's got some interesting ideas, but it needs to have the fanfic level buffed out.
Geordi and Leah show... Well, this is at best a bit of a kitbash. The Leah/Geordi relationship itself carries a certain burden of metacommentary on fanfiction. And, given that among the detested parts of TNG was Wesley, how exactly are kids on a busted starship not going to be annoying?
Galaxy-class (or specifically Galaxy) as essential... This depends on how essential it is to do the same thing again versus doing something new. Clearly they're reaching for the same-old-same-old by bringing back Picard, but this would be a clear double down.
Beverly Crusher is dead... It's not great news for Gates McFadden, but it would add a layer to Picard's character. The idea that Picard would ever marry, though, still seems a little out there.
Geordi isn't the chief engineer... He's just kinda there as a professor or something? And some kid like "Sam Barclay" is actually sticking the chewing gum inside the matter-antimatter chamber? It's just going to be a perpetual rerun of "Relics".
Ancient civilization rigged the ship with a "time" bomb... It's an interesting idea, though in general the concept had aped the "Lost in Space"/"Star Trek:Voyager"/"Stargate: Universe" setting, and now suddenly it's into "Doctor Who" territory. TNG's time manipulation episodes are generally thought of as weak, so making a whole series about that is troublesome.
Picard forced to take command due to a disaster... Eh. It's the Chakotay arc writ a bit larger. The fact that Geordi specifically asked Picard along kind of weakens the notion that it was just a chance occurrence. But it's probably fine compared with the alternative of Picard having being one of those Kirk-like busybody admirals constantly inviting themselves along on missions. Or any idea that Picard would be brought back but sidelined from the captain's chair.
There's probably a fair bit of graverobbing and canonical Nazi-fighting in Dixon Hill and the Man from South America...Darth Wedgius wrote: ↑Thu Sep 13, 2018 4:06 pm He liked archaeology. Give him a fedora and one of those Ferengi energy whips and the show just writes itself.