Morgaine wrote:George Lucas' best work when he was under a budget, under duress and had other people to shoot down his bad ideas and fix his atrocious editing.
So George Lucas is Hideo Kojima... Makes sense.
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The thing that hits me hardest about the Trade Federation's motive is that it's so easy to just explain in the opening. All it needs to say is, "Naboo and a bunch of other planets have done something intolerable to the Trade Federation, so the Trade Federation attacked. Congress does nothing but debate this."
The implication being, the Trade Federation is now a power unto itself and can act with impunity, because the Republic can't or won't do anything.
The way what actually was written reads as, "There's a tax dispute over trade in outlying systems, so the Trade Federation invaded Naboo. Congress does nothing but debate this."
This works almost fine. The main problem being the disconnect in the first sentence. How invading Naboo will solve the tax dispute is unclear. If, for example, Naboo was stated to have raised taxes, then it would all be clear.