ChiggyvonRichthofen wrote:I think you have to give some credit to Lucas for coming up with a more sophisticated story on the political side of it. The OT deals with political stuff only a very simple level, and the politics of the ST just looks incoherent to me so far. The problem is that the format (big budget space opera) isn't conducive to complex political drama and intrigue. It isn't fleshed out enough to make total sense, and people certainly didn't seem to be clamoring for more scenes in the Senate.
I'd give him credit if that's what he actually did. This isn't more complicated in terms of politics because there are no politics. There's no debate, there's no discussion, there's no exploration of ideas. It's just as unambiguous as the OT is in that regard: The Trade Federation are the Bad Guys, Naboo and Amidala are the Good Guys. The problem is that it does nothing to demonstrate that like the OT does.
TGLS wrote:The thing that hits me hardest about the Trade Federation's motive is that it's so easy to just explain in the opening. All it needs to say is, "Naboo and a bunch of other planets have done something intolerable to the Trade Federation, so the Trade Federation attacked. Congress does nothing but debate this."
The implication being, the Trade Federation is now a power unto itself and can act with impunity, because the Republic can't or won't do anything.
Don't pretend it's as simple as writing a new text crawl. Who is Naboo? Who is the Trade Federation?
We have no idea who these players are or how the Republic functions, so how can I get invested in this, even if one side is doing violence? If you're dropped into a situation without context, you won't automatically care about the events. That's why almost the VERY first thing to happen in Star Wars is a piece of dark comedy, as the droids are completely oblivious to the death happening as they wander through a firefight. Since we have no context to care about anything happening in that fight, the audience's lack of investment is played for laughs. That's despite the fact that it's clear which side is which and the text crawl explicitly telling us the Empire is evil.
There's no reason given for me to care about Naboo being conquered. If you have a particularly well written main character who is from Naboo, then maybe I'll start to sympathize with them, and I'll recognize and identify with their struggle to save their home. If you can show me scenes of people suffering under the oppressive heel of the occupying droids, I can react with horror. But the main face we're given for that villain are those battle droids who are written comically to the point that it's hard to see them as threatening. We halt any attempt at political drama to spend half the movie in the Tatooine subplot that does nothing to further the main story. The only reason Tatooine is relevant to the main plot is that the characters have to get off of Tatooine-you can do that in 5 minutes if you want to focus on your main story, or you can spend 50 minute and have a silly podrace and introduce a ton of colorful and irrelevant characters.